Well

Hmmm, you seemed to be a nervous wreck towards the end of lunch. I'm sorry about that, I should have kept my thoughts to myself a few weeks ago.

Anyway, you seem to have a lot on your mind - I'd like to know what, but you seem to clam up ;) We can talk next time I see you or maybe you're more comfortable with an email? We can get together next week - we don't have to drink if you'd rather not (I never thought I'd say something like) .. We can just hang-out, catch a flick, or whatever. Shit, I'm free all nights :) but don't worry, I understand if you'd rather not.

Thanks again for reading the story, and (I don't think I have to say this) please let me know if it or any part of it sucks. I put a lot of value in your opinion, and you saying you liked my silly little story gave me a warm feeling.

Have fun tonight, it looks like it is going to be ugly (weather).